tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8927080481526144171.post2714054102744176183..comments2012-10-28T13:23:49.329-07:00Comments on Musings in the Haberdashery: Crunchtober 2012 Day 21Eddie Louisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653651673354167341noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8927080481526144171.post-81934766237257974982012-10-28T11:10:01.861-07:002012-10-28T11:10:01.861-07:00Nice scene! I like how Stella doesn't even wor...Nice scene! I like how Stella doesn't even worry about it, she's all 'yeah whatever, let's just have fun!'. As for the sex, I don't think it was too much or too little - I think you've found a good balance between sensation and emotion.Jamiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09586937756876719931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8927080481526144171.post-88731280390697484402012-10-24T14:20:35.536-07:002012-10-24T14:20:35.536-07:00I apologize in advance that I can't offer dece...I apologize in advance that I can't offer decent comments or criticism on sex scenes but so far I think you're doing a fine job! There was one part where I got the idea they were in one position and then it seemed like they were in a different one that didn't really work how I thought (embarrassing as THAT is to say!). I guess, if he was kneeling, how was she able to get his pants off? Or was he laying down? Things like that. Otherwise... reading on!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03785042851557672440noreply@blogger.com